Why it works
Much of the feedback students receive does little to improve their learning, and the reasons are consistent: it is vague (good job, needs work), so the student cannot act on it; it is one-sided, either all praise that gives nothing to improve or all criticism that gives nothing to build on; or it is not referenced to any goal, so the student cannot tell what good would look like. The medal-and-mission structure, associated with Geoff Petty and drawing on wider feedback research, is a simple, memorable frame that addresses all three failures at once, which is why it is so useful for teachers who want to raise the quality of their feedback without an elaborate system. The structure has two parts, both of which must be referenced to the learning goal or success criteria, which is the element that makes the whole thing work. The medal is information about what the student did well, stated specifically and against the goal: not a vague well done, but this introduction states your argument clearly and previews your three reasons, which is exactly what the criteria call for. The medal is not empty praise; it is feedback that tells the student which of their moves succeeded, so they know what to keep doing and can do it deliberately rather than by accident. The mission is information about what to improve, stated as a specific, actionable next step, again against the goal: not a vague needs more detail, but your second paragraph makes a claim but gives no evidence, so add a specific example that shows it. The mission is one clear thing to do next, not a catalogue of everything wrong, which keeps it actionable rather than overwhelming. The power of the frame comes from three features working together. It is balanced, so the student gets both what is working and what to improve, which sustains motivation while still driving growth. It is specific, because both the medal and the mission describe concrete features of the work rather than general impressions. And it is goal-referenced, because tying both to the success criteria is what turns praise and criticism into feedback, information about the gap between the work and the goal and how to close it. The frame is also memorable and quick enough to use constantly, on written work, in conferences, orally in the moment, which matters because feedback helps only when it is frequent and consistent. A few cautions keep it honest: the medal must be genuine and specific or it becomes the hollow praise half of a compliment sandwich; the mission must be a real, doable next step, not a vague exhortation; and both must connect to the goal rather than to the teacher's general taste. The workshop helps teachers practice writing genuine, specific, goal-referenced medals and missions, and build the structure into their everyday feedback.
The research: Geoff Petty and feedback research on specific, goal-referenced, actionable feedback.
The run-of-show
Choose your slot. The agenda, timings, and length update to match.
The core activity: write genuine medals and actionable missions
The heart of the session is practicing the medal-and-mission structure so feedback is balanced, specific, and goal-referenced.
- Name the three failures of weak feedback: it is vague, it is one-sided, or it is not referenced to a goal, so the student cannot act on it.
- Give the medal: specific information about what the student did well against the criteria, so they know what to keep doing deliberately.
- Give the mission: one concrete, actionable next step against the criteria, not a catalogue of everything wrong, so it is doable rather than overwhelming.
- Reference both to the goal: tying the medal and the mission to the success criteria is what turns praise and criticism into feedback about the gap and how to close it.
Facilitator notes
- The goal-reference is what makes it feedback: without it, the medal is just praise and the mission is just criticism.
- Keep the mission to one concrete, doable next step; a list of everything wrong is not a mission and does not get acted on.
- Guard against the hollow medal; empty praise turns the structure into a compliment sandwich, which students see through.
Adapt it
- Elementary: use simple, concrete language for the medal and mission and tie both to a success criterion the child can see.
- Secondary: write specific, goal-referenced medals and missions on work and in conferences; keep the mission to one actionable step.
- Any setting: use the frame orally in the moment, not just in writing, so feedback is frequent and immediate.
Participant handout
One page for every teacher. Print it, or save it as a PDF.
Medal and Mission: balanced, specific, actionable
Give a medal and a mission, both against the goal: say specifically what the student did well and one concrete next step, so the feedback is balanced and actionable.
- The learning goal or success criteria I am measuring against:
- The medal (specifically what the student did well):
- The mission (one concrete, actionable next step):
- How I keep the medal genuine and specific, not hollow praise:
- How I use the frame frequently (written, oral, in conferences):
Make it stick
Medal and mission makes feedback balanced and actionable. Close by setting the follow-up:
- Name a check-in: are your medals specific and your missions a single doable step, both tied to the goal?
- Bring one piece of work with a medal and mission you wrote.
- Keep both referenced to the criteria; without the goal, you are back to vague praise and criticism.